Pushing forward. I tried something smoky at the top of the fire plumes, I don't think I like it. One of the toughest things when I was thinking about this was figuring out how the light and shadow look around the pipes and fire. I thought they'd be a bit more chrome, but this works better, the dark, sooty pipes make the fire look brighter, plus chrome, it's kind of an immobile thing, a static, curvy mirror. It looks good because it sits still and we can see the sky and the desert in it. Yawn. No desert sky here. This is grit.